The Street Was Painted In Blue

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The Street Was Painted In Blue

Written: © Maxima

I was awaken by dreams
The street was painted in blue
The wooden fences were crooked
Some people were leaning
Against them
Chatting…

The morning is a bit chilly
I cover your naked body
Kissing your sleepy lips…
I leave the window open
So the birds can sing to you
While I’m away
You’re beautiful
I love you

Reading your poem I can immediately see, feel and smell – much the same as I can hear the voices mentioned in the dream … Quite remarkable that your words and your description – which seems to be so simple (meant positively!) is generating such “visions” and is producing paintings and emotions so powerfully. Wonderful!
Sending you my best wishes!

Michèle

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3 thoughts on “The Street Was Painted In Blue

  1. ladyfromhamburg November 13, 2014 at 21:53 Reply

    Reading your poem I can immediately see, feel and smell – much the same as I can hear the voices mentioned in the dream … Quite remarkable that your words and your description – which seems to be so simple (meant positively!) is generating such “visions” and is producing paintings and emotions so powerfully. Wonderful!

    Sending you my best wishes!
    Michèle

  2. mondidascoprire November 13, 2014 at 12:17 Reply

    very nice !

  3. Ileana November 12, 2014 at 23:39 Reply


    Sunt pe-aici, nu v-am uitat,
    Pe suflet v-am sărutat
    Somn ușor, stimați amici
    Și mai mari dar și mai mici,
    Somn ușor, din partea mea!

    I’m on here, I have not forgotten,
    On soul I kissed
    Sleep well, dear friends
    And higher and lower
    Sleep well, my part!

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